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moldava ([personal profile] moldava) wrote2003-11-27 09:44 am
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Drabble

Heheh, watching that DVD last night was bound to have after effects *g*

I’ve never written first person POV before, so please let me know if it works *squishes Boromir*

Edit: Shriney is right, of course, this is second person POV, I am so totally distracted this morning *g* blames Boromir




Title: Lines
Author: [livejournal.com profile] moldava
Pairing: A/B
Disclaimer: not mine, only in my dreams
Notes: [livejournal.com profile] razzleslash, here’s your winnings :)


Lines


You look at the lines along the palm of your hand, idly remembering that wisewomen back in Gondor say that you can read a man’s whole life from those lines. Who he is, his past, his future, his life and death, his loves. You wonder what your lines say, but you have no skill at reading them.
Yet there are other signs you can read.

You trace with a finger the bite mark at the base of the thumb and the dried smear of semen at the heel of your palm.

And all you really need to read is there.

[identity profile] milochka.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 01:29 am (UTC)(link)
AAAAA! *scream* This is great. Hot and wise and lovely all at once.

Boromir doesn't look very easy to squish in that armor though

[identity profile] shrinetolust.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
Well, I could squish him by wrapping my thighs around his face...ohh, sorry...*ahem*

[identity profile] milochka.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
I could squish him by wrapping my thighs around his face...
Ah yes, a Blade Runner kiss of death... *G*

[identity profile] moldava.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
just give me Boromir and I can assure you I'll find a way to squish him, armour or not

thanks sweeties, glad you enjoyed it

[identity profile] shrinetolust.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 01:35 am (UTC)(link)
*squee!!* This was lovely and yummy...such beautiful introspection with incredibly squeeable naughtiness at the end!! rroowrrr...

and I think it's 2nd person POV, yes?

[identity profile] moldava.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
you're right of course, you wouldn't believe just how distracted I am this morning *g*

[identity profile] shrinetolust.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
heee...the English Major in me just has to come out sometimes... :P

I can see being distracted by Boromir....and oh, what a lovely, sexy, manly, powerfully voiced, green-eyed god of a distraction he is...*sigh*

[identity profile] fileg.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
Terrific! The introspective build up is perfect, not hint of the slam to come - then- Slam. Wow.

[identity profile] moldava.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
heheh, thanks
Slam... I like that :)

[identity profile] oran.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 02:15 am (UTC)(link)
Oh that was sooooo good - thanks for that. :)

Take care xx

[identity profile] moldava.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 03:48 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!!!

I am really looking forward to your next instalment of Sean/Vig naughtiness, is Beanie still out buying toys??!!

[identity profile] oran.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yes! Buying toys and pondering on just how to make Vig really suffer *evil grin on Beanie's lovely face* I think Viggo is going to have a very 'difficult' reunion day.

[identity profile] lady-razzle.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
Oooooooooooooh, Razzle likes her present.

And all you really need to read is there.
I second that. Fabulous.

*Does a manic SLASH FOR ME! dance*
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[identity profile] moldava.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
Ahh, good, glad you liked your present ;)
*hugs*

[identity profile] lady-razzle.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 07:52 am (UTC)(link)
*squeezes the crap out of you*

[identity profile] liars-dance.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
I don't much care which person's POV it is (though I think its 2nd) - it's about hands and its sexy and hot and ever so naughty - I love it!! Go watch some more of the DVD please - as soon as you can, chop-chop

*hugs you*

[identity profile] moldava.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 03:52 am (UTC)(link)
You are right of course re POV, you wouldn't believe how distracted and forgetful I am today, I blame it all on AraBoro (and Vronsky of course *melts*)

*snogs you*
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[identity profile] cinzia.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 04:14 am (UTC)(link)
:O

<--Am reduced to emoticons. You just made my head explode. *wibble*

Am so happy you could watch the DVD! Now I'm eagerly anticipating what you're going to come up with after watching the other disks... ;)

*adores* :D

[identity profile] moldava.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 01:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, I am anticipating what YOU will come up with after watching the dvds ;)

non so ancora esattamente quando rinsbane sarà a milano ma ti andrebbe di trovarci tutte a cena?
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[personal profile] helens78 2003-11-27 06:52 am (UTC)(link)
Aii!! Very naughty, in such a good way. Yum.

[identity profile] moldava.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Naughty? Me? *halo*
Thanks :)

[identity profile] jenmstar.livejournal.com 2003-11-27 11:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Loved it. Most wonderful.

[identity profile] moldava.livejournal.com 2003-11-28 12:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks lovely (and it's *always* a pleasure to see that icon ;)

[identity profile] jenmstar.livejournal.com 2003-11-29 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
A cute man and a good glass of red wine. What more could one ask for?
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[identity profile] phantomas.livejournal.com 2003-11-28 09:45 am (UTC)(link)
And all you really need to read is there.

~adores you~

very moving, and totally agree with you Boromir is *so* distracting (says she, who's been watching bits and pieces of the TTEE continuosly for the past few days in all her spare time)

[identity profile] moldava.livejournal.com 2003-11-28 12:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh, thanks, exactly 100 this time ;) and btw I loved what you did to the previous one, it was much sharper that way

ci sono stata dentro solo perchè sto sfogando tutta la mia logorrea in una mappazza di fic in cinque puntate *g*
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[identity profile] phantomas.livejournal.com 2003-11-29 04:37 am (UTC)(link)
Squeeeee!
quando quando?

TT EE mi ha distrutto, non riesco a smettere di guardare l'angst, il brotherlove, l'addio, il pain di F...urgh.

Altro che killing me softly ~g~
Me needs mappazza :)
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[identity profile] ribby.livejournal.com 2003-12-01 06:49 am (UTC)(link)
Wow... I love the build-up to a surprising, but extremely satisfying (hee!) conclusion. And in 100 words, no less... *is jealous* Wonderfully *real* somehow.

*hugs*

~Kris

[identity profile] uisgich.livejournal.com 2003-12-01 01:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow! I loved it!! Strong hands mmmm :)