you're being too hard on yourself. This is really good. the first draft was good too, but i definitely love the changes you've made. =D The whole building sand castle analogy just ties in everything together i think.
I think i've already told you this, but i'll say it again, I just love the image of Viggo dropping his notebook to go play in the sand. *dreamy sighs*
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Date: 2004-06-21 08:29 pm (UTC)I think i've already told you this, but i'll say it again, I just love the image of Viggo dropping his notebook to go play in the sand. *dreamy sighs*
*smooches you*